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Text from Nai-98 - English

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  • Furthermore, another issue is the increase high school dropout rate.
  • Currently, most working children do not study because they do not want or can not do by not having the same resources that other children.
  • As a consequence, this situation causes the illiteracy, and for example them to fall into drugs and alcohol.
  • This problem could be addressed if government motivate to children to study and helping to families on them.
  • For example, they can create scholarships, also government entities could do companions that get jobs to the head of household.
  • This would certainly reduce the school dropout rate and the families, mainly, the children would have more opportunities to learn and change their life.

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