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  • Last but not least, another problem is the kind of professionals and life quality in the future.
  • Many children that today do not go to school in the future they won not study on universities or working in companies that permit to them have a good stability economic.
  • At the same time, this situation can repeat with their children.
  • The way forward must be to change thinking.
  • Thus, government should care the children’s basic rights, and society as families change their ideas because the youth are the future of any country. this would help to they would have a better quality of life and their families too.

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    • Many children that today do not go to school in the future they won not study on universities or working in companies that permit to them have a good stability economic.
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    • Thus, government should care the children’s basic rights, and society as families change their ideas because the youth are the future of any country. this would help to they would have a better quality of life and their families too.
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