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Letter 2.
After high school - gymnasium, i˙m graduate on Economy faculty, department of Marketing.
Now, i looking for a job.
In free time i go on fitness, dancing and reading books.
Also I go on curse of italian language.

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句子 1
- After high school - gymnasium, i˙m graduate on Economy faculty, department of Marketing.
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句子 2
- Now, i looking for a job.
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句子 3
- In free time i go on fitness, dancing and reading books.
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句子 4
- Also I go on curse of italian language.
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