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  • CONCLUSION

  • All in all, it is clear that today the working children face a range of problems in regards to their childhood development, the school dropout and the kind of future that them will have.
  • What has been said in the preceding paragraphs has shown the need to start tackling these issues and finding possible solutions to improve the quality of life of the working children.
  • To do so, not only governments, but also all of society mainly the families must change their ideas in regards to the child labor as way to support poor families.
  • Offering help and creating programs to children's families, and care the children's basic rights.
  • This way, the problem of child labor in some countries might not completely disappear, but will probably improve.

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    • All in all, it is clear that today the working children face a range of problems in regards to their childhood development, the school dropout and the kind of future that them will have.
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    • What has been said in the preceding paragraphs has shown the need to start tackling these issues and finding possible solutions to improve the quality of life of the working children.
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    • To do so, not only governments, but also all of society mainly the families must change their ideas in regards to the child labor as way to support poor families.
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