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  • The Article

  • Furthermore, in the article the author didn't support his claims.
  • He mentioned some experts scientific works like Christopher Landsea.
  • Also, he refered two Nasa studies one from Jet Propulsion Laboratory, and the other from Langley Research Center but he doesn't cite sources.
  • When we look the NASA website, we can see all the scientific data with charts, so it is more confidential source to understand clearly.

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