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Hiiiii!
I am from Spain, i am nineteen years old, and i would like to learn this language.
I am new in this comunity and i trust make good friens here, good afternoon. ;)

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- I am from Spain, i am nineteen years old, and i would like to learn this language.
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- I am new in this comunity and i trust make good friens here, good afternoon. ;)
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