添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

Aluriaからのテキスト - English

  • introduction

  • Hello everyone!
  • My name is Adilet and I from Kyrgyzstan.
  • I want to learn English, because my job requires that.
  • I hope it will be very interesting, exciting journey.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English