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  • essay - how my parent met (part 1)

  • In this essay I will write about my parents and how my parents met.
  • My mother was 24 years old and had a broken relationship behind her.
  • Her ex- boyfriend came from Berlin and my mother drove to him.
  • She wanted to surprise him but what she doesn't knew he had an affair with another women.
  • He gave my mother back his golden engagement ring which they choose together previously.
  • My mother was very sad about this broken relationship and sought solace in her work.
  • In this time she was working as a professional huntig weapon controller.
  • Maybe it is important to know that my mother was born in a town named Suhl.
  • The city was famous about her company simson.
  • She have produced since 1856 firearms, automobiles, bicycles, motorcycles and mopeds.
  • A coworker from my mother told her that she has found a husband over an advertisment in the newspaper.
  • To my mother it seemed that her coworker was very happy.
  • That is also the reason why she has wrote an advertisment in the newspaper.

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