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new member of this family:)
Hello everybody :-) My name is Omelette. i'm 18 years old i live in Thailand, my town is beautiful country!
i want to learn all language in the world if i can please help me, i can help you about thai if you want!
thanks and love

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Sentence 1
- Hello everybody :-) My name is Omelette. i'm 18 years old i live in Thailand, my town is beautiful country!
  Vote now!
- เพิ่มการแก้ไขใหม่ - Sentence 1
Sentence 2
- i want to learn all language in the world if i can please help me, i can help you about thai if you want!
  Vote now!
- เพิ่มการแก้ไขใหม่ - Sentence 2
Sentence 3
- thanks and love
  Vote now!
- เพิ่มการแก้ไขใหม่ - Sentence 3