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  • Essay - How My Parents Met (2)

  • They met at the apartment of my mother and my father was really nervous.
  • He brought my mother roses and then they drank together wine and were talking for a long time.
  • Afterward they often met again.
  • One time they went to the forest to collect mushrooms with a big holdall but they didn’t find any mushrooms.
  • Instead they got closer.
  • I was born in 1988 and my parents married when I was a half a year old.
  • My mother never wanted to marry but she wanted a child.
  • My grandparents persuaded her to marry my father because they wanted to become grandparents.It was also advantageous to be married in the DDR because you got more ressources.
  • The funniest thing of this story is that in fact my father never wrote a letter to my mother.
  • It was my grandfather who has written this letter to my mother in place of my father.
  • My father didn’t knew it.

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