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My birthday
My name is Elezaveta.
I am thirteen years old .I have one main day in the year.
It is my birthday☺.
When I woke up in the morning I knew that this day must be particular in this year .
From the morning my mom began to cook birthday supper.
In this year my mom baked very testy pie .
It called Napoleon .
Soon went my friends .
We had a good time togather.
We played and danced.
My family bought iPad for me.
I dreamed about it for a long time!!
My birthday is wonderful holiday.

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- My birthday
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- My name is Elezaveta.
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- I am thirteen years old .I have one main day in the year.
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- It is my birthday☺.
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- When I woke up in the morning I knew that this day must be particular in this year .
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- From the morning my mom began to cook birthday supper.
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- In this year my mom baked very testy pie .
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- It called Napoleon .
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- Soon went my friends .
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- We had a good time togather.
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- We played and danced.
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- My family bought iPad for me.
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- I dreamed about it for a long time!!
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- My birthday is wonderful holiday.
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