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Please correct me. Thank you very much.
Today, I woke up really late.
I ate a lot of cake and read a book.
After that, I did my homework and cooked lunch.
We ate noodle because our cooker was broken.
In the afternoon, I went to my teacher's house.
She taught me play Dan Tranh.
I was better than before but I still had many mistakes.
She taaught me for 2 hours and her son always played next to us. He was small.

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- Today, I woke up really late.
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- I ate a lot of cake and read a book.
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- After that, I did my homework and cooked lunch.
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- We ate noodle because our cooker was broken.
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- In the afternoon, I went to my teacher's house.
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- She taught me play Dan Tranh.
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- I was better than before but I still had many mistakes.
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- She taaught me for 2 hours and her son always played next to us. He was small.
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