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Text from Tamias - English

  • I am afraid of cat

  • when i was a little girl, i was stuck in the kitchen with a cat. it stood right the door, then i couldn't go out of the kitchen.
  • The cat stared at me then scratched its claws on the kitchen floor. i was yelling while my uncle laughed at me. he meant to tease me. i started crying when the cat stepped on my foot but he just laughed oy loud. from that, i am very afraid of cat. its eyes look every terrible at night. i shudder to think of cat

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    • when i was a little girl, i was stuck in the kitchen with a cat. it stood right the door, then i couldn't go out of the kitchen.
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    • The cat stared at me then scratched its claws on the kitchen floor. i was yelling while my uncle laughed at me. he meant to tease me. i started crying when the cat stepped on my foot but he just laughed oy loud. from that, i am very afraid of cat. its eyes look every terrible at night. i shudder to think of cat
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