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  • Today, I'm very happy to tell you about my second brother.
  • He is my second brother and my teacher too.
  • He is 23 years old.
  • He fluent 7 languages at his age.
  • He is very handsome and smart.
  • He is planning to write a book.
  • He is really good at Literature.
  • He has an elder brother and a pretty girlfriend.
  • He helped me to learn English and he pampered with me.
  • If I want to read my favourite book in English, He will find it for me.
  • He sent to me many CDs in English to I listened many times to learn pronunciation.
  • He chatted with me everyday on FB and he share his feel with me.

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