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  • Biography

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  • Daiana Hoffmann was born in 28.03.1991 in Saint-Petersburg, Russia.
  • Graduated from Music college "Rimsky-Korsakov" in Saint-Petersburg as a "choir conductor" (2011, Honored Artist of Russia, professor Boris Abalyan ) In 2011-2013 studing choir conducting in Moscow Conservatery "Tchaikovsky".
  • In 2013 recieved a scholarship for studing in Belgrade Music Academy (Belgrade, Serbia).
  • In 2015 recieved a Bachelor as an "orchestra conductor" (Professor Boyan Sudjich).
  • Now Daiana is studing in Moscow Conservatery "Tchaikovsky", faculty "Operatic and symphony conducting" (Professor Stanislav Diachenko).
  • Took part in master-classes with a great musicians such as: Gennady Rozhdestvensky, Vladimir Yurovsky, Vladimir Ponkin, Dmitry Bashkirov, Josef Deller, Slavek Vrublevsky.
  • Daiana is a prize-winner (1st prize) at international piano competition "Nis" (Nis, Serbia) Daiana Hoffmann is an artist director and chief conductor of Moscow Youth Chamber Orchestra.
  • In season 2015/2016 orchestra under leadership of Hoffmann had a concerts in a best concert halls in Moscow, such as Great Hall of Moscow Conservatery (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t8g75YCG1oo&feature=youtu.be), Rachmaninov Hall of Moscow Concervatery and etc. In September 2016 Moscow Youth Chamber Orchestra with have a solo concert dedicated to the anniversary of Dmitry Shostakovich.
  • He conducted orchestras as like the RTV Belgrade Orchestra, Belgrade Music Academy Simphony Orchestra, Moscow Conservatery Students Orchestra and others.
  • In an odditional to the conductor, Daiana performs as a pianist and singer in different concert halls.

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    • Graduated from Music college "Rimsky-Korsakov" in Saint-Petersburg as a "choir conductor" (2011, Honored Artist of Russia, professor Boris Abalyan ) In 2011-2013 studing choir conducting in Moscow Conservatery "Tchaikovsky".
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    • Now Daiana is studing in Moscow Conservatery "Tchaikovsky", faculty "Operatic and symphony conducting" (Professor Stanislav Diachenko).
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    • Took part in master-classes with a great musicians such as: Gennady Rozhdestvensky, Vladimir Yurovsky, Vladimir Ponkin, Dmitry Bashkirov, Josef Deller, Slavek Vrublevsky.
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    • Daiana is a prize-winner (1st prize) at international piano competition "Nis" (Nis, Serbia) Daiana Hoffmann is an artist director and chief conductor of Moscow Youth Chamber Orchestra.
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    • In season 2015/2016 orchestra under leadership of Hoffmann had a concerts in a best concert halls in Moscow, such as Great Hall of Moscow Conservatery (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t8g75YCG1oo&feature=youtu.be), Rachmaninov Hall of Moscow Concervatery and etc. In September 2016 Moscow Youth Chamber Orchestra with have a solo concert dedicated to the anniversary of Dmitry Shostakovich.
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    • He conducted orchestras as like the RTV Belgrade Orchestra, Belgrade Music Academy Simphony Orchestra, Moscow Conservatery Students Orchestra and others.
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