Corrections

Yesterday she couldn’t go out because outside it was raining a lot so she stayed in her bedroom, but about seven o’clock she hear a loud noise on the second floor, that made she felt really afraid because there wasn´t anybody there.

She phoned her father but he didn´t take the phone so she went away from her house and had walking in the rain for a long time until she arrived to maria´s house.

They both toke a coffee while she was telling about the noise in her house.

At half past eight her father phoned to she and he pick up her.