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  • Please correct me. Thank you very much.

  • Hello everybody.
  • Today, I'm very happy to tell you about information technology.
  • As we known, technology help us very much.
  • In fact, we have computers, laptops, robots,...
  • We can search internet on our computer.
  • We can search some informations about fashion, food, apartment, instrument or furniture.
  • We can watch films there.
  • We can share our activities or our feelings on Facebook or Yalo.
  • We can speak with our friends although they are far from us.
  • We can sale or buy something on internet.
  • Robots help me very much in the past, in the fact and in the future.
  • In the past, some robots could help us made a car.
  • In the fact, some robots can help us clean our house.
  • In the future, some robot will help us make the clothes or teach English for children.
  • I think technology is important in our life.

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