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Last birthday
I remember last my friend´s birthday.
She turned 24 years.
It was in a cottage far away from the city.
There were all my friends and we spend all the weekend at its town.
There was a pool and a lot of trees surrounded.
We played board games and also went trekking on the mountain but it was very hot so we didn’t walk a lot.
At nights all of us took a swim in the pool and did some sports water like waterpolo.
I enjoyed a lot.

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- I remember last my friend´s birthday.
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- She turned 24 years.
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- It was in a cottage far away from the city.
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- We played board games and also went trekking on the mountain but it was very hot so we didn’t walk a lot.
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- At nights all of us took a swim in the pool and did some sports water like waterpolo.
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- I enjoyed a lot.
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