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hello, my name is estefania, my day begin waking , after i do exercise approximately for thirty minutes, i make the breakfast for my sister and me, if i am studying, i get ready very fast and i take the bus for go at the univerity, i take classes and then i return home, i do homework before that my parents arrive at home, because they make me lose concentration then dinner with them and i go to spleep.

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