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  • If the sea was the sky and the sky was the sea, I would fall out of the water then to clouds with your hand in mine.
  • We could swim through the clouds.
  • You can't sleep at night.
  • You float in darkness every night.
  • It would be just a spot of black from the sky.
  • You just lie down inside the small black one.
  • Just take one little step out then you can see a lot of things surrounding you.
  • Look, the world is so big and great.
  • It has variety things.
  • Take the world up side down.
  • The boys jumping into the sky and the birds swimming under the sea.
  • You can play a drum on the top of the world.
  • The sky is the stage and stars are your audience.
  • It's okay even if it's a dream.
  • It tells you're sound sleeping.
  • You feel stuck inside four walls with only a square under your feet.
  • They come closer to you every day and you feel scared.
  • You've been trapped in long time but remember it is just a small hole when you look down from the sky.
  • You're just standing in a poor hole.
  • Break out the walls.
  • Maybe they might be sheets of paper.
  • Crawl into the sky and see how much you can do.
  • You'll find your own thing unlike you think you can't do anything.
  • Your days are long and filled with pain cause you can't get the nights.
  • You feel tired, exhausted and sleepy but you can't sleep.
  • You just want to fall into the night.
  • The world gives you hard time, but it doesn't offer you the night.
  • They stole all your nights.
  • They took your stabilities and breathes of relaxing.
  • Why all weakness and anxious turn to lights but your exhausting and peace doesn't stay in the night.
  • You can't even sleep during the day.
  • You wish you would die for a week.
  • Lying down just in darkness makes you think of many things.
  • One day it might start to eat you.
  • Probably it's already been started.
  • It might have been nibbling from your fingertip

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