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Text from kathelion - English

  • A little text about me.

  • Hello everyone, My name is katherine, I am 27 years old, I am from Colombia - Bogota, but rigth now I live In Brazil, Rio de Janeiro.
  • I miss some things of my country for example: my family, the colombian coffee, the mountains, my home.... but rio is a great city too and I live happy here because I love the sea, the warm temperature, the beach, the new culture and delicius food.... and I have a great reason to feel me happy here: my boyfriend is brazilian and I love him.
  • During the next december, I am going to Colombia to visist my parents, and I think that will be and amazing trip, probably we will travel to Guajira, a state close to the caribean.
  • this is all for today, have a great day and thank you for your corrections.

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    • Hello everyone, My name is katherine, I am 27 years old, I am from Colombia - Bogota, but rigth now I live In Brazil, Rio de Janeiro.
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    • I miss some things of my country for example: my family, the colombian coffee, the mountains, my home.... but rio is a great city too and I live happy here because I love the sea, the warm temperature, the beach, the new culture and delicius food.... and I have a great reason to feel me happy here: my boyfriend is brazilian and I love him.
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    • During the next december, I am going to Colombia to visist my parents, and I think that will be and amazing trip, probably we will travel to Guajira, a state close to the caribean.
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