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Text from EmelyM - English

  • About Dentistry 2

  • Hi! it's me again.
  • A couple of days ago, I was writing about the career I´m studiying, dentistry.
  • Well, let me say a little bit more about it.
  • Dentistry is more than just seen teeth.
  • You see, for me the most important component is the gum; it doesn´t matter if you born with perfect teeth, if you don´t have a good hygiene, if you don´t take care about it, you will be losing your teeth slowly, yes believe me!
  • If the gum is sick, the illness can take your teeth even if they don´t have decay.
  • Unfortunately, this little paragraph won´t ever let me express the complex and the beauty of dentistry.
  • People around the world, please take care of your teeth :D.
  • Thank you very much for helping me out.

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