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About Dentistry 2
- Hi! it's me again.
- A couple of days ago, I was writing about the career I´m studiying, dentistry.
- Well, let me say a little bit more about it.
- Dentistry is more than just seen teeth.
- You see, for me the most important component is the gum; it doesn´t matter if you born with perfect teeth, if you don´t have a good hygiene, if you don´t take care about it, you will be losing your teeth slowly, yes believe me!
- If the gum is sick, the illness can take your teeth even if they don´t have decay.
- Unfortunately, this little paragraph won´t ever let me express the complex and the beauty of dentistry.
- People around the world, please take care of your teeth :D.
- Thank you very much for helping me out.
- EmelyM
July 2016
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