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Please correct my mistakes. Thank you very much.
- Today I'm very happy to tell you about my birthday.
- My birthday is at 8th of February.
- This year, I had a birthday party with friends.
- The evening before my birthday, my father made a big birthday cake for me.
- It was really nice.
- I made the birthday party in the morning.
- I woke up early and washed dishes.
- My friends came, one by one.
- They took their presents on the table and helped me made our lunch.
- There were 13 friends who came to my birthday party.
- They were my best friends.
- Lucy, Min and Aries helped me did a big fish.
- Kakashi, Rin and Naruto helped me made some food from meat.Anh other helped us.
- We were very happy.
- I had a nice birthday party.
- misangocle08022004
July 2016
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