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  • Please correct my mistakes. Thank you very much.

  • Hello.
  • Today I went to Bo Ho to practice English.
  • The sky was blue and the wind blew.
  • There were many people there.
  • Most of them practiced exercise.
  • There were many people from other countries.
  • Some Vietnamese students went next to them and talked with them so I couldn't find any person to talk.
  • I met a family, they had 3 sons.
  • They are Dutch so they couldn't speak English.
  • I met a French girl.
  • She came there with her family and her sister talked with me a lot and she took me her facebook.
  • Then I met another French Girl.
  • She is 28 years old.
  • She came there alone for 3 weeks and her friends will come with her after 3 weeks later.
  • She didn't have facebook and she said maybe she is the only person in the world who doesn't have facebook.
  • She was tall and really pretty.
  • After that, the sky was dark and I went home.

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