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My stupid story
Hello!My name is Violetta.My best friend is Kristina.
I spend my summer holidays with her.
I have many video with her.
It is not just video , IT IS VERY SHAME VIDEO. and nobody almost not see this video. it is my stupid ,veeery stupid story , and i say goodbye because I don't know that I write ( GOODBYE

Judul
- My stupid story
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Judul
Kalimat 1
- Hello!My name is Violetta.My best friend is Kristina.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 1
Kalimat 2
- I spend my summer holidays with her.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 2
Kalimat 3
- I have many video with her.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 3
Kalimat 4
- It is not just video , IT IS VERY SHAME VIDEO. and nobody almost not see this video. it is my stupid ,veeery stupid story , and i say goodbye because I don't know that I write ( GOODBYE
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 4