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Text from MORATA - English

  • LEISURE AND PLEASURE

  • I´m going to talk about leisure and pleasure.
  • Nowadays, there´re a lot of activities which you can enjoy doing, such as playing computer games, riding motorbikes, doing sport, or simply doing window shopping.
  • The selection depends on the sensations as you want to feel: amusing, exciting, scarying… after that you are able to choose the hobby you want to start up: it could be energetic or quiet, dangerous or not, with more people or alone, outdoor or indoor… So i´m interested in doing sport, i enjoy playing tennis, going running or going to the gym, because there´re energetic and healthy activities.
  • But I usually prefer staying in natural sides.
  • Depending on the season, in Winter I like going to the mountains and practising risky sports for example snowboarding, skiing, and climbing.
  • It´s good for breathing fresh air.
  • However, in summer I choose to go to the seasides and doing activities like sunbathing, swimming in the beach, resting on the sand and seeing monuments.
  • That´s why I´d recommend doing sport as a hobby because for me it´s one of the most challenging and useful free-time activities i can imagine.
  • However, I enjoy Reading a book, watching movies and listening to music because I find it really satisfying and relaxing.
  • In spite of everything I´ve just said, I have a nice time when I go out with my Friends and we take a beer in some bar at night.

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    • Nowadays, there´re a lot of activities which you can enjoy doing, such as playing computer games, riding motorbikes, doing sport, or simply doing window shopping.
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    • The selection depends on the sensations as you want to feel: amusing, exciting, scarying… after that you are able to choose the hobby you want to start up: it could be energetic or quiet, dangerous or not, with more people or alone, outdoor or indoor… So i´m interested in doing sport, i enjoy playing tennis, going running or going to the gym, because there´re energetic and healthy activities.
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    • Depending on the season, in Winter I like going to the mountains and practising risky sports for example snowboarding, skiing, and climbing.
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    • However, in summer I choose to go to the seasides and doing activities like sunbathing, swimming in the beach, resting on the sand and seeing monuments.
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    • That´s why I´d recommend doing sport as a hobby because for me it´s one of the most challenging and useful free-time activities i can imagine.
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