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Text from jack0493 - English

  • my family

  • hi, i talk about my family.
  • she is my mom, she is cooking a cake for birthday my older brother.
  • he is my dad. he is 52 years old. he's driving his car.
  • he is my twin brother. he likes play soccer same me too. in that photo he's playing soccer in the beach.
  • my older brother is police. he is working hard at the night. finally me. i like excerise me. everymorning i get out to run inside the stadium. after i get play soccer. i like football (soccer ).
  • thanks for reading.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English