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  • Positive and negative aspects of our modern way of life

  • It is commonly known that development of science is cause many changes in human lives.
  • Young people are accustomed for things which are unfamiliar for old people.
  • There was old days when live didn't change quickly.
  • Nowodays life seem be easier but all has any drawbacks.
  • The main advantage of development is access.
  • We have access to unlimited knowledge.
  • We know and we can make a lot of things because of Internet.
  • If Internet doesn't help directly we can find specialist in means of Internet.
  • We can check out geographic destination by means of it.
  • We can travel because of fast vehicles and roads.
  • Besides we spent a lot of time browsing social networkings sites as Facebook and Twitter etc. In spite of facilities there are disadvantages development.
  • For instance nowodays life is chase for new gadgets, carst etc. Although we spare a lot of time there is much things time-consuming as worthless web sites and TV programs.
  • Peolple often are unconscious addiction to smartfons or applications, games.
  • Bonds of friendship are broken.
  • People have often many friends on facebook but they haven't true friends.
  • There are shallow friendships and relationships.
  • Therefor now is more divorces than old days.
  • To sum up life is full of gadgets and facilities.
  • They help us live easier.
  • However we are in bigger hurry and stress out.

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