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Text from Maria-Tereza - English

  • Deaths in “Game of Thrones”

  • “Game of Thrones” is one of the most popular TV-serial.
  • It is an adaptation of book series “The Song of Ice and Frame” written by G. Martin.
  • HBO studio already filmed 5 seasons and they had a great success – people all around the world like “Game of Thrones”.
  • There are many discussions about plot, fans often try to predict what will happen or (what is more usual) who’ll die next.
  • Death is the common topic for discussions and jokes, because the story has a lot of characters and many of them died.
  • Is it bad or good?
  • Is death that thing, which makes this story so famous?
  • Is it normal to show so many deaths in one story?
  • Well, some people don’t like it at all and I could understand them – that’s so sad when your favorite character die (specially, when it happened before some important event).
  • It seems to them that “Game of Thrones” is full of deaths, sex and scheming.
  • Those people argue that the story become too valiant and even brutal.
  • In the other hand, there are a lot of fans of “Game of Thrones”, who stoically endure everything, what G.
  • Martin did to his novel.
  • They argue that so many deaths and brutal details make this story interesting and realistic.
  • Both sides have a point, but in my opinion, death is integral part of “Game of Thrones”, because it makes the story unique.
  • Of course, you’ll be sad, if good and cute character die, but let’s be honest – bad guys also dies and that’s great.

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