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My experience
When I got my baccalauriat in 2015, I thought that I have free time to practice my hobbies and be safe but I was wrong.
When I integrated preparatory classes for engineers I lost my dream to be mecanic's engineer.
I collapse my health because of depressing, because of numeros hours of vigil. What can I do?
I must continu this advanture because I don't have to choose

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- My experience
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- When I got my baccalauriat in 2015, I thought that I have free time to practice my hobbies and be safe but I was wrong.
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- When I integrated preparatory classes for engineers I lost my dream to be mecanic's engineer.
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- I collapse my health because of depressing, because of numeros hours of vigil. What can I do?
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- I must continu this advanture because I don't have to choose
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