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Please correct my mistakes.Thank you very much.
Hello.
Today I will tell you about jobs.
I want to have a good job in the future.
When I learnt at primary school, I wanted become a fashion designer.
But I can't draw good.
So now, I must to change my future job.
I want to have a job that I can travel all the famous places on the world.
I think maybe I can become a translator.
If I become a translator, I can go everywhere, I can meet my idols and I can earn money.
Maybe I become a programmer or a person work about computer programs, I can work everywhere: at home, at work, in the USA, in China, In Vietnam,...
I hope I can find a job what fit with me.

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- Hello.
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- Today I will tell you about jobs.
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- I want to have a good job in the future.
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- When I learnt at primary school, I wanted become a fashion designer.
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- But I can't draw good.
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- So now, I must to change my future job.
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- I want to have a job that I can travel all the famous places on the world.
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- I think maybe I can become a translator.
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- If I become a translator, I can go everywhere, I can meet my idols and I can earn money.
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- Maybe I become a programmer or a person work about computer programs, I can work everywhere: at home, at work, in the USA, in China, In Vietnam,...
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- I hope I can find a job what fit with me.
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