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  • What is willpower ?

  • Everyone has willpower, but to give a precise definition it can not do all .
  • Let's start with the concepts.
  • So, what is willpower ?
  • About which so much talk.
  • Let's try to understand.
  • Interpretations there are several and they are all correct.
  • But in general, willpower is the ability to overcome temptations and to achieve the goal .
  • Power is our capability to counter circumstances.
  • Will is a great desire to do something, to achieve something.
  • Businessmen, poets, doctors and other professions invested in the definition of their components.
  • For example, the willpower to Shakespeare - not that other as a gardener.
  • Yes, that's right.
  • Our personality is blooming garden.
  • And willpower is the gardener who cares for the garden and decide which flowers you need to grow in it , and which must be eradicated.
  • As we can see, definitions can be vary, but all agree on one thing, that willpower not come by itself.
  • Seldom who from birth are endowed with power-willed qualities.
  • The willpower need to develop to make an effort.
  • Here arises the second question about how to strengthen willpower?
  • Because willpower is there are no muscles which you can build .
  • There are four components of willpower .
  • It is the faith , desire , courage, and patience .
  • Faith means to believe in yourself and go to the goal .
  • Desire means when our desires show us the way where to go and what to achieve for .
  • Courage means that if a person is not courageous, he will not be able to take some important decision .
  • Patience means , with patience we remain faithful to our goals and never give up .

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