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Text from Jenny77 - English

  • Go out to Miraflores

  • Today my friend and I went out to the pier, when we arrived there we decided sit down to watch the sea but as in my country is in autumn we felt much cold so we walked along the pier.
  • After that we arrived to the Kennedy Park, this park is known as Park kittens because in this park you will finding a lots of cats, these cats are there waiting a person who want to adopt them.

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    • Today my friend and I went out to the pier, when we arrived there we decided sit down to watch the sea but as in my country is in autumn we felt much cold so we walked along the pier.
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    • After that we arrived to the Kennedy Park, this park is known as Park kittens because in this park you will finding a lots of cats, these cats are there waiting a person who want to adopt them.
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