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  • Please correct my mistakes.Thank you very much.

  • Today I will tell you about my afternoon.
  • In the afternoon, I had an English class.
  • A malaysian woman taught my class.
  • When we began the lesson, I and my classmates submitted our homeworks.
  • My teacher opened her laptop and began give us some exercises.
  • We reviewed the vocabulary list and did the exercises.
  • After that, we studied in a book what had name "Word Power".
  • One of my friend - Alexander didn't color his picture so my teacher said with him: "If you don't color your picture, I will call to your mom." Alex was afraid.
  • He said: "Please don't call my mom.
  • I will color it." Then, he colored the sun in the picture and he began throw the crayons.
  • My teacher wrote something on a small paper and said: "I will call your mom now, Alex." Alex yelled: "NO.
  • Don't call her, please." All the class laughed.

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