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  • JOBS

  • I am going to talk about my first job.
  • Nowadays, there are a lot of kinds of Jobs for teenagers such as hotel receptionist, baby-sitter, waiter, life guard… I think it is a great opportunity for them to get some work experience even though often it isn´t a very well-paid job.
  • However, I was just 16 and it was the first time I had worked as a waiter.
  • It was the summer holidays and I had just finished school.
  • It was a good way of earning little money.
  • I felt exhausted when I ended the day, because I talked with a lot of people.
  • In spite of everything I´ve just said I felt I was learning useful skills, like a public relationship.
  • The next summer I worked as a bricklayer, it was too hard because it was a hard physical job, but I was able to buy my motorbike.
  • I have been working as a tennis coach since I started my degree so I could have the opportunity to achieve my ambitions.
  • Currently, in Spain, it´s really difficult to get a job due to the economical crisis, but in summer there´s always a chance fot teenagers to work more.
  • Furthermore, most grandparents look after their grandchildren especially for the parents' work situation.
  • In this case, older people play a key role in the education of the younger so it is wonderful.

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