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my weekend,April the 21st 2013
Saturday, I went to ballad with my girlfriend and her grandma; sunday, it isn't a good day, because I learned a bad novel.

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- Saturday, I went to ballad with my girlfriend and her grandma; sunday, it isn't a good day, because I learned a bad novel.
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