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  • HOLIDAY

  • I´m going to talk about holidays.
  • Nowadays, there are a lot of kinds of holidays, such as a camping holiday, a beach holiday, sightseeing, backpacking, cruises… Last summer, my girlfriend and I were in Mallorca and it was amazing.
  • I usually avoid to stay in crowding places, that´s why I search sides where I can be relaxed.
  • In my opinión, I don´t need to waste a lot of money for expensive holidays, paying luxurious hotels or going for a cruise ship.
  • Furthermore when I am on holiday, I enjoy doing physical activities, such as going for running, riding my motorbike or my bike, and playing tennis.
  • These are healthy activities that I can do wherever I go.
  • Also, these are cheaper than other hobbies.
  • Next summer I would like to go abroad to continue improving my English level.

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