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20.7
I met Grant at Walsall in the afternoon, we got water and coconut water from poundland and caught a bus to Birmingham.
We had a very nice weather, hot with wind it was very pleasant.
We went to the bullring and been in different shops, I found what I was looking for a cap.
We had lunch in wagamama a japanese restaurant, I got seafood ramen I really enjoyed and a smoothie.
Afterwards we waked until found a nice pub where we had a pint of beer either.
We step back and got ice cream from the bullring then we went back to walsall.
I spoke with Mimi on viber just when I get home.

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- I met Grant at Walsall in the afternoon, we got water and coconut water from poundland and caught a bus to Birmingham.
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- We had a very nice weather, hot with wind it was very pleasant.
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- We went to the bullring and been in different shops, I found what I was looking for a cap.
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- We had lunch in wagamama a japanese restaurant, I got seafood ramen I really enjoyed and a smoothie.
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- Afterwards we waked until found a nice pub where we had a pint of beer either.
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- We step back and got ice cream from the bullring then we went back to walsall.
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- I spoke with Mimi on viber just when I get home.
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