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  • My travel to Ica

  • Hi I would like to tell you about my travel to Ica.
  • First at all I want to say that I'm peruvian, I live in Lima, the capital of Peru, and Ica is a city which is near to this.
  • Ica is usually visited for foreigners because it's a beautiful place, it is situated in a desert which make it very strange, but also there is a lake in it so it is an "oasis".
  • I travelled to this place many years ago, in fact I hardly can remember how was it because I was only 7 years old but I think it was a nice experience.

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    • First at all I want to say that I'm peruvian, I live in Lima, the capital of Peru, and Ica is a city which is near to this.
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    • Ica is usually visited for foreigners because it's a beautiful place, it is situated in a desert which make it very strange, but also there is a lake in it so it is an "oasis".
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    • I travelled to this place many years ago, in fact I hardly can remember how was it because I was only 7 years old but I think it was a nice experience.
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