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Văn bản từ MR-GLOT - English

  • History in english

  • When I was quite young, I did something silly one day.
  • I often spent evenings where my mother worked and I used to watch the television and eat but quickly I got bored.
  • My other worked cleaning at sweet shop and I couldn’t stay in home alone so I went with her.
  • Outside of the sweetshop there was a square and many people sat at public benches.
  • Mainly people who went there were retired people to spend their whole evenings.
  • So as if I was an detective I started following one man who was there and when he looked back I hid behind of benches, trees or cars.
  • My mission I was discovered what it was the real identity of this poor man… and I would sincerely swear that he didn’t notice me but suddenly he turned back and screamed me “why are you following me? Stop doing it!
  • I was so scared that I came back running at sweet shop where my mother was and I didn’t go out during the rest of the day.

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  • câu 2
    • I often spent evenings where my mother worked and I used to watch the television and eat but quickly I got bored.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
  • câu 4
  • câu 5
  • câu 6
    • So as if I was an detective I started following one man who was there and when he looked back I hid behind of benches, trees or cars.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • My mission I was discovered what it was the real identity of this poor man… and I would sincerely swear that he didn’t notice me but suddenly he turned back and screamed me “why are you following me? Stop doing it!
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • I was so scared that I came back running at sweet shop where my mother was and I didn’t go out during the rest of the day.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8