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  • New way of evolution theory Introduction

  • For advance, I’m sorry for my english, that unfortunately I don’t practice a lot on the way of writing.
  • There is something that fascinate myself, the theory of evolution from Darwin.
  • It’s obvious, it’s easier to progress in language if you are totally passionate about your subject. So, I do.
  • Be sure, that I’m not only interesting of the oldest version of Darwin theory.
  • But what I prefer is the new ways that are coming from the theory.
  • For instance, why American are bigger than French ?
  • Why Chinese are smaller than Dutch ? why in some countries some diseases don't exist ?
  • I don’t think that there is only one or some factors but many.
  • But, understanding these facts under the spectrum of evolution is fascinant.
  • That could help us to live better.
  • So that’s why, I’ll try to write few articles on this website about this infiny thematic.
  • I hope that other mankinds (correctors) will enjoy this subject, and help me to improve my English writing.
  • On the way of Darwinian medicine.

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