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Hi :)
Hallo everyone, I'm fabio, I live in Italy and i'm 28 years old.
I love so much your country. i hope you correct me because my english is very poor :) I love so much play drums and play soccer.
I hope soon to come there for you and visist several things.
I love u so much :D

CouldcryApril 2013100% GOOD (1 votes)
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- Hallo everyone, I'm fabio, I live in Italy and i'm 28 years old.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
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- I love so much your country. i hope you correct me because my english is very poor :) I love so much play drums and play soccer.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I hope soon to come there for you and visist several things.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- I love u so much :D
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4