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Hello
Hi !
I am Denys , 25 years old .
I would like learn english language and I need practice with people who know language on good level .
Maybe , you can help me ? Thanks !)

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- Hello
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- Hi !
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- I am Denys , 25 years old .
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- I would like learn english language and I need practice with people who know language on good level .
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- Maybe , you can help me ? Thanks !)
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