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I'm a new in here.I'm going to take TOEFL in December.so I want to improve my English skill and get high grade.
If you want to make new friend/exchange language/travel in Taichung,please to let me know.We can have a good talk.

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- I'm a new in here.I'm going to take TOEFL in December.so I want to improve my English skill and get high grade.
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- If you want to make new friend/exchange language/travel in Taichung,please to let me know.We can have a good talk.
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