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Text from misangocle08022004 - English

  • Please correct me.Thank you very much.

  • Hello.
  • Today, I'm very happy to tell you about a story.
  • There is a family with four members.
  • Peter is Jane's elder brother.
  • Their mom comes in their rooms to make them get up.
  • They plan they're out in sun.
  • They meet their friends.
  • They play with a ball.
  • One of them throw the ball into the water so they ask a fisherman for the boat to catch the ball.
  • They play in water.
  • Some of them play with the ball and others sit in the sunshine.
  • Jane jumps into the water.
  • She likes that.
  • In the afternoon, they walk down the street. they walk though a pet store.
  • Some polices fix a little part of the street.
  • They play with there friends more and more.
  • Their mom said with them that don't be wet when you come home.

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