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Text from misangocle08022004 - English

  • Please correct my mistakes.Thank you very much.

  • There is a girl.
  • Her name is Pam.
  • She lives on a farm with her parents.
  • She had 2 big horses.
  • She always takes them to water.
  • She can do every farm works.
  • She can look after the pigs and help to milk the cows.
  • Peter and Jane go to school with Pam.
  • Sometimes, they have tea time together.
  • They drink tea and eat cake.
  • They walk around the farm.
  • They ride the horses.
  • They take some apples to the horses.
  • They see the pigs.
  • Pam's father gives the pigs something to eat.
  • There are some baby pigs and big pigs.
  • Peter wants to look at the fish.
  • He gives them something to eat.
  • Pam's mother takes some eggs to Jane's mother.
  • Those are big eggs.
  • Peter and Jane go out the sea on a boat with their friend, Tom.
  • Peter can fish.
  • Tom helps them to get some big fish for tea.
  • Tom talks about the sea, the boats, the fish.
  • Peter and Jane must come home.
  • They meet their friends in their city.
  • Peter plays with Bob.
  • Jane plays with Mary and her doll, Ann.
  • The next day, they have a tea party at home.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English