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My last holidays
A month ago, I went in London, , for my first trip alone.
At the start, I was a bit afraid, acknowledge that my english skills need to be improved...
I couldn't stop thinking that people would laugh at me if I spoke, because of my mistakes and my accent.
Thereafter, somehow I began to overcome my fears, and communicate with people.
I even came out making really good friends and remembrances.
London has gave me two lessons to ponder.
First, you should not care about the other opinion, especially when you are at you best.
And second, that earth is full a people just wait to amazed you.

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- My last holidays
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- A month ago, I went in London, , for my first trip alone.
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- At the start, I was a bit afraid, acknowledge that my english skills need to be improved...
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- I couldn't stop thinking that people would laugh at me if I spoke, because of my mistakes and my accent.
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- Thereafter, somehow I began to overcome my fears, and communicate with people.
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- I even came out making really good friends and remembrances.
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- London has gave me two lessons to ponder.
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- First, you should not care about the other opinion, especially when you are at you best.
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- And second, that earth is full a people just wait to amazed you.
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