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Text from misangocle08022004 - English

  • Please correct my mistakes.Thank you very much.

  • Hello.
  • Today is my first day of school.
  • Last night, I prepared my school uniforms, my schoolbag and my lessons.
  • So I went to bed late.
  • This morning I woke up early.
  • I walked to school and bought some bread to eat.
  • I was the first person came to my class.
  • Some minutes later, my best friend came.
  • Her name is Tu.
  • Long time no see her, she was different last school year.
  • She was taller, bigger and more beautiful than last year.
  • She had many stories to tell me.
  • About 20 minutes later, all people of my class came.
  • They were different.
  • We told many stories with our friends.
  • Another my friend was Trang.
  • She went to Dak Lak in this July.
  • She said she wanted to went there by airplane alone but her uncle was sick so her mom went there with her.
  • My best best friend Thao came to school late.
  • We cleaned the schoolyard and we came home.
  • Thao's dad took me to my home.
  • He and Thao invited me to eat breakfast with them.
  • Then I came home.
  • We will go back to school in 16/8.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English