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  • Apply for college

  • (Topic - You are a student who wants to apply to Green Pines College.
  • You are experiencing financial problems at the moment.
  • Task: Write a letter to the Principal of the College, explaining your situation and ask for information on scholarships or other means of financial help available.
  • ) ------------------ Dear Sir/Madam, I like to apply for Green Pines College.
  • I finished high school in mathematics and physics and I would like to continue my educations in this college, because, of high rank and equipment in the college.
  • In addition, Green Pines College is not so far from my residence and it is another priority.
  • although, we can handle our expenses but, I could not spend more money in education after death of the father.
  • I decided to investigate how can I take a scholarship or any kind of subsidy.
  • Please give me any information that can help me to solve my problem. you can send me an e-mail or we can schedule to make a phone-call.
  • I look forward to hearing from you.
  • Yours faithfully Mr. Arvin

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