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  • Job application letter- Housekeeper

  • ((TOPIC: You want to apply for the following job.
  • Write a letter to Mrs. Keller describing your previous experience and explaining why you would be suitable for the job.
  • Advertisement: Housekeeper required for private home.
  • Experience is necessary.
  • Contact Mrs. D.
  • Keller.)) ------------------------------------------------- Dear Sir/Madam, I am applying for the housekeeper job that you advertised.
  • I graduated with A grade point average from housekeeping in University Of Tehran.
  • After education I work in this occupation for two years.
  • In course of my present job I have been responsible for the childcare.
  • I am familiar with elderly care.
  • In addition, I have first aid and cooking certificates.
  • I like to help elderlies and children.
  • I have sense of responsibility and interested in management and cleaning, It seems that this job is a opportunity to gain more experiences in the profession.
  • If you find my skills and experiences suitable, please contact me to schedule an interview.
  • Thank you for your time and consideration.
  • Your faithfully Mr. Arvin

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